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Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Giveaway ~ Charred Heart (Heart of Fire #1) by Lizzy Ford ~ Book Tour ~ First Chapter


Charred Heart (Heart of Fire #1)

by Lizzy Ford
Published November 23rd 2013 by Guerrilla Wordfare 
Paperback: ISBN
1623781264 (ISBN13: 9781623781262)
Paperback, 234 pages
Kindle Edition, 198 pages
ASIN: B00GTC1412
Book Design by OK Creations


BLURB:
A modern day retelling of “Beauty and the Beast”
***Recommended for ages 18+ due to multiple, creative, detailed, steamy, sexy-time adult situations.***
For a thousand years, Chace has searched for a way to break the curse placed on him by a jilted lover. He’s a dragon shifter, one who can’t control when the magic will force him into a different form. He’s already lost everyone he ever cared about a few times over and doesn’t know how much longer he’s meant to suffer.
At his wit’s end, he makes a deal with a mysterious figure that offers him what he wants most – an end to his misery – in exchange for everything that’s his: His life, his power. His heart.
The next day, he meets Skylar, a modern day dragon slayer whose mission is to cage him – or kill him. Sexy, witty and brave, she is the yin to his yang, the woman destined to break the curse, balance his magic and make his broken heart whole.
Except it’s too late. Not only has he sealed his fate, but an innocent one-night-stand with Skylar has dragged her into the middle of a deal with the devil, one she won’t escape, if he can’t convince her that dragon shifters aren’t her enemies. 

BIO:

Lizzy Ford is the author of over twenty books written for young adult and adult paranormal romance readers, to include the internationally bestselling “Rhyn Trilogy,” “Witchling Series” and the “War of Gods” series. Considered a freak of nature by her peers for the ability to write and release a commercial quality novel in under a month, Lizzy has focused on keeping her readers happy by producing brilliant, gritty romances that remind people why true love is a trial worth enduring.
Lizzy’s books can be found on every major ereader library, to include: Amazon, Barnes and Noble, iBooks, Kobo, Sony and Smashwords. She lives in southern Arizona with her husband, three dogs and a cat.

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Giveaway:  Charred Heart swag pack (USA ONLY)


I will warn you now, this book if for Mature readers only!! It has very graphic sex scenes, staring early, in Chapter 3. I almost stopped reading, thinking this had to be an erotica book, and I do not read those. But, I didn’t stop, felt I had to read more, to give it a chance, and it had already had my curiosity after chapter one when learning a bit about Chace, who I liked right away. I guess what turned me off the book is that they jump into the sex instantly, I mean if they said 5 words I would be surprised, they didn’t know anything about each other. Now I do get that there was a supernatural attraction going on, but still would like to have seen some more story building before the big sex scene.

So give it a chance if you’re like me and do not care for explicit sex scenes. I was very happy that there is a great story here, where many erotica books lack, they are all about the sex. This one is not like that, which is good.

So once I was past the uncomfortable parts of the overdone sex scenes I really enjoyed the book and didn’t want to stop reading it. Chace is a great character; he’s a dragon shifter, which I have not read much about before. Skylar is a dragon slayer, and their attraction is instant. I can’t really say too much, or I will give away some good stuff.

I really liked learning about Skylar’s past along with her, as she didn’t have much memory, so we got to learn it all right along with her. The world-building was also great, I felt I was right there seeing it all first hand. Great writing for sure.

Overall I am giving this book 5 out of 5 stars, as I believe as a whole the book is great, and is a series I want to continue to read. I plan to get book 2 Charred Tears soon and read it. Will also post a review of it when I get it done.

So paranormal romance lovers come check out this series. It’s got the steam and shapeshifters too.

Read chapter one below, get to know at least Chace a bit, it will probably get you hooked like it did me.

Chapter One

Chace glanced up from the glass of amber beer as his closest friend, Gunner, approached their usual table in the corner of the bar. Unlike Chace, who was a dragon shifter, Gunner was able to transform into a panther the size of a car. He had dark hair and almond-shaped, brown eyes, a muscular frame, a gait worthy of a cat and two pints in his hands. He sat and placed one glass down beside Chace’s untouched drink.
“You ate your pizza, which means you can’t be too sick to drink your beer,” Gunner observed.
“There’s no excuse for wasting good pizza,” Chace replied. “Just not thirsty.”
“You really did it, didn’t you?” Gunner guessed.
“Yeah,” Chace replied. “I talked to him.”
“And?”
Chace’s eyes swept around the shifters’ bar, the only safe haven for a dying race of supernatural creatures that were being hunted and killed off. The tables, chairs and flooring were all mahogany, worn but polished and clean, the ceiling and lattice work on the pillars resembling those of an English pub rather than a typical biker bar. The walls were decorated with autographed classic rock posters, and shadowboxes with guitars, drumsticks and other rock curios perched above the row of plush booths along one wall.
The bar fed off his magic and was full this evening, though its patrons were tense. Their talk consisted of worried murmurs and the occasional cursing.
“He’ll give me what I want,” Chace replied. “Doesn’t seem to be any strings attached. Just wants me and everything I own, which is basically just my bike at this point.”
Gunner sat down, frowning. “Why Chace?”
Because I’m tired of watching people I care about die around me. Chace debated what to tell his friend, who had been with him the longest of anyone still living.
“You remember Steven?” he asked.
“Yeah. He built your chopper, right?”
“Yep. I used to take it to him for maintenance every year for forty years, and he checked up with me monthly to make sure it was working well. He built it by hand,” Chace mused. “He loved that thing like it was his own.”
Used to. I can guess where this is going,” Gunner said. “He passed?”
“Last week. I got an email from his son. He left me spare parts in his will.” Chace chuckled. “Think he liked the bike more than me, but he was …”
“… the last human friend who hadn’t died. I get it.”
They both fell quiet. Sometimes, Chace wondered where the years went, because they seemed to jumble up and fly by in a blink. And sometimes, he wasn’t certain he’d make it through the end of a week, especially when someone like Steven died and made him question everything in his life all over again. He’d outlived every friend he’d ever had, up until he chose only to associate with other shifters. Every time he let himself fall for a girl or made a friend, he convinced himself that this time, it would work out. The curse would lift, and he wouldn’t be left alone again.
It never works out that way.
“A thousand years, Gun,” he murmured. “I’ve been alive a thousand years. Steven was eighty, and he left me spare parts, because he knew I wasn’t going to die anytime soon.”
“Oh, hell. Here we go again,” Gunner joked. “It’s the nature of who we are, man.”
“It’s the nature of who you are,” Chace corrected him. “I was made a shifter. You all were born shifters.”
“Doesn’t matter, does it? We’re all the same now.”
“Except you can die in a fight with another shifter. Me? No such luck,” Chace replied. “You expect to be immortal. I can’t figure out why I’m not dead.”
Gunner snorted in response.
“You know what I was doing when I turned eighty?”
“Sleeping your way across Finland?”
“Yes, but there’s more.” Chace grinned. “I was going to the funeral of my mother, who lived to almost a hundred. You ever see a Viking funeral?”
“On TV.”
“They’re spectacular.” Chace allowed himself to think of the memory he didn’t like recalling. He could almost smell the scent of burning wood as his mother’s body was set afloat on a fiery Viking ship into the sea. The evening had been cold and clear, the sunset smearing brilliant pinks, oranges and purples across one end of the sky while the other end was deep blue and scattered with blinking stars.
He’d gone incognito, disguised as a distant cousin, for no one but his mother knew his secret at that point that he was immortal. Even she didn’t know why the curse was placed on him. It was a secret he hadn’t told anyone. Ever. He’d been a stupid, hotheaded fool when he was a kid.
“I want to be human again. I want my heart back. Anyway.” He shook his head. “I went to see Mr. Nothing this morning, and he made me a smokin’ deal. He’ll lift the curse in exchange for everything that is mine.”
“So … what is that exactly? Did you ask?”
Chace shrugged. “Don’t care. The moment before he makes me mortal, I’m going to move my cabin one last time and just live out the rest of my years in peace. Beside, I only have my magic and my bike.”
“When I met you, you were this hot-headed, cocky bastard.” Gunner leaned forward, his face taut with concern. “You mellowed out over the years a bunch. But this decision sounds like it was made by the young dragon shifter who didn’t stop to think before lighting things on fire.”
Chace said nothing. A small part of him agreed, but he’d been more disturbed by Steven’s death than he cared to let on. Long ago he tried to close off his emotions to the world. Maybe it was monthly chats and ritual trips to visit Steven that let the tiny man with a huge smile work his way under his skin. After a thousand years, Chace should be completely numb, able to rationalize death as a stage in the natural way of the world the way Gunner did.
But he couldn’t, and he’d tried for years to philosophize his way into accepting death.
“I made the deal anyway,” Chace said. “He’s going to send a messenger tonight or tomorrow with one of his cards to let me know where to meet him for the final spell.”
“You know we don’t know anything about Mr. Nothing.”
“We know he’s older than even me, and that he’s got the magic to do this. The deal is straightforward. Worst case scenario, he kills me.” Chace shrugged.
“I don’t like it.”
“I don’t either. What other choice do I have of ever having this curse lifted? The woman who placed it on me – she’s been dead for over nine hundred years, Gunner!”
“I know.”
“At some point, I’ll outlive you and the rest of the guys we run with. No, Gunner, I’m done. What she did to me can’t be undone any other way, and I’ve looked for a way to end the curse my entire life,” Chace said firmly. “I turned a thousand last week, and that’s when Steven died. It’s a sign.”
“I hear ya.” Gunner’s voice was soft. “I don’t blame you, Chace. I just don’t trust Mr. Nothing.”
Mr. Nothing had gotten his nickname because no one could find out anything about him. No one knew where he lived and yet, he was easy to find whenever Chace had wanted to talk to the elusive creature that had been around since he was made a shifter.
Easy to find. Not easy to get answers out of.Chace had nearly gone mad the first few years of the curse trying to get the shadowy figure that only appeared at night to tell him something about his newfound immortality or his magic.
To this day, Chace had no idea what Mr. Nothing was, aside from a shifter of some kind with great power. He suspected Mr. Nothing was a dragon, though he’d long since given up trying to get answers out of someone who didn’t seem interested in anyone else.
Gunner waved to someone who had just entered, and Chace looked up to see the third member of their four-man gang. A phoenix shifter with a like-minded affinity for fire, Luke was blond like Chace, though his hair was short and his eyes dark, whereas Chace had blue eyes and kept his dark blond hair long in the way of his Viking people.
“Don’t tell the others,” Chace said to Gunner. “I’ll let them know when everything is final.”
“All right.” Gunner didn’t appear to be happy about keeping secrets from the other two members of their tight-knit crew.
“Thanks. I’m gonna go get changed.”
“I’ll put on some tunes. I think the shifters need something to cheer them up.”
Chace rose. He agreed silently and took in the faces of those around him once more, trying to distance himself from his concern. As much as he tried to deny it, he knew they were his people, even if he’d started off as a human. They had nowhere else to go, and no one else to turn to. The shifter creed was simple: to live their lives quietly without harming anyone or bringing attention to their society. It was how they remained hidden, a secret subculture that the humans had no need to know about.
Yet someone had found out, and the shifter ranks had thinned considerably the past twenty years. Once numbering in the thousands, the several dozen men and women seeking refuge in his bar were all that remained.
Chace left out of the back door of the bar and stepped into the warm air of early evening. The distant drone of traffic on I-10 reaching him across the flat desert terrain.
He didn’t want to feel worry or fear for the shifter family that adopted him when he had no one else, but he did. On one hand, the timing for him to decide to strike a deal with Mr. Nothing felt wrong, because he wouldn’t be around to help the others, if they needed it. He’d airlifted a few other shifters out of their homes when they’d been too afraid to leave. Their fear struck him hard, even when he tried to remain numb to the world.
You care too much to abandon them, Gunner had told him once.
And he did. The brash, selfish, cocky young man who was cursed for being a fool had turned thoughtful over the years, compassionate and observant of his world. Even if he tried to keep everyone at a distance.
Chace focused on the small cabin that materialized out of thin air. Another creation of his magic, he had managed to take his home with him wherever he went over the years, the only real solace he had. It was the cabin where he’d been born and where his mother had lived up until her death. Only after returning to it after her funeral had he realized that his magic would let him take it with him.
There were days when he thought it was more alive than not with a mind of its own. Its magic and his were intertwined but not the same. It reacted to his emotions and commands, and yet, it had its own life as well, which had baffled him for many years until he finally just accepted it.
He walked in. The cabin had looked the same for many years. It had a simple floor plan consisting of a great room where everything was and a small bathroom he’d added a hundred years before. The great room held a king-sized bed with a wood stove, living room area, small office space and a storage corner where he kept what precious items he had.
Chace changed out of the dusty clothes he’d worn on his daily ride and into a fresh t-shirt and jeans, though he replaced his motorcycle jacket in case he had the urge for a midnight ride, like he did sometimes. Crossing to the storage corner, he paused.
“Would you stop rearranging my boxes?” he growled at the cabin.
It didn’t reply. It never did, but the boxes returned to the order where he preferred them of their own accord. The tiny disturbance reminded him of how independent the magic of his cabin was, when it chose to be. It was like his magic, which obeyed him most of the time and then sometimes, responded too readily to his emotions and forced him to shift when he otherwise wouldn’t.
“It’s like living with a passive-aggressive woman,” he said, amused. “You listening?”
The boxes suddenly flew off their shelves and tumbled to the floor at his feet.
“A thousand years old and less mature than me,” he teased it. “Clean that up, please.”
He turned away, knowing the magic would obey, but probably not until after he left. He didn’t understand why his cabin was possessed or the link between it and his own independent magic.
After a thousand years, he no longer cared. In a few days, none of it would matter anyway.
He left the cabin, gaze going to the sky once more. A familiar yearning filled him, the call of the heavens clear in his thoughts. He found peace in the sky and in flying around.
Deciding he had time for a quick flight, he peeled off his clothing and tossed them on the porch. The transformation from human to dragon was brutal on his body – and irreparable on the clothing.  
Pain roared through him, hot enough to rob him of breath. His flesh tore and his muscles were ripped from the bones. His bones then snapped and changed, forming the skeleton of his new shape, before sewing themselves back together. Tissue, muscle and skin adjusted and rearranged atop the new skeleton.
The first time he shifted, he thought he was dying. A thousand years later, he could control the pain with ease, even if he hated the bursts of agony and the twisting of his bones, skin, and insides that occurred when he changed shapes.
The process lasted mere seconds, and he unfolded his long wings on either side of his body. The translucent wings glittered dark teal in the moonlight, the same color as his thick scales and the fur edging them.
 His senses were far more sensitive in his dragon form, and he breathed deeply and sneezed fire. The stream of yellow barely missed the bar. The scents from within were overpowering, and he shook his head then leapt effortlessly towards the sky. His wings caught him easily and propelled him upward.
He imagined the distance between him and the stars growing shorter as he soared upward, and he beat his wings hard, wondering if tonight was the night he got close enough to capture one.
Amused by his thoughts, he dipped his wings, caught an air current, and began playing, alternately floating in place and weaving in and out of the current, always intrigued by the challenge of how it tugged or pushed at his wings. He dove, wheeled and slammed on the brakes in midair, plummeting towards the earth only to unfurl the long wings and catch himself a couple feet from the ground.
Chace loved the sensation of the air ruffling his fur and tickling him, the cool air of evening filling his lungs. He loved the freedom of being a dragon most, the ability to take to the heavens whenever he felt the urge. He found peace in the skies, looking down at the miniaturized buildings, vehicles and cars. It gave him perspective, reminded him that his biggest concerns always looked tiny from far above.
Content with his short flight, he circled the bar lazily, slowly descending from the sky. The choice he’d made and the deal he’d bartered for with Mr. Nothing was done. The mysterious Mr. Nothing gave him time to think it over once last time, but Chace already knew his decision.
He was tired of seeing everyone he cared about die. He wanted to be human again, and nothing anyone said was going to convince him otherwise.

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Monday, July 8, 2013

Colour Wielders By Dawna Raver 5 Star Book Review & Excerpt ~ New Adult

Colour Wielders         
Heirs of the Magykal Realm Series Book One
By Dawna Raver

Genre: New Adult, Paranormal, Urban Fantasy Romance

Publisher: Curiosity Quills Press

Word Count: 133k

Cover Artist: Ricky Gunawan


Book Description:

Behind the Mysts, hidden from Mortal eyes, is a land where Gods and creatures of myth and legend dwell. And in the Mortal Realm, their Princess lives.

Quinn Sinclair is clueless to who she is. She thinks she's an ordinary young woman—well, mostly ordinary—living an ordinary life with her less than loving mother in Conifer, Colorado. On the night of her birthday, Quinn finds herself betrayed by a man who sends her life spinning out-of-control.

As she struggles to pick up the pieces, a vision of a man with haunting tourmaline-blue eyes begs her for help, and she finds herself transported into a Magykal battle forever changing her life.

Arik Morgaine—demi-god bad boy and outcast of the Magykal Realm—tried to avoid contact with Princess Quinn Sinclair for eighteen years, not wanting to make good on an old threat. But the fates have other plans. Arik can no longer deny his growing desire for Quinn, or the need to protect her from those wanting to control her burgeoning powers. Can the two of them come together and save the Magykal Realm from being destroyed by the Darkest of Magyks, or will powers beyond their control destroy them and their world forever?




About the Author:

Dawna Raver is an the author of paranormal romance and urban fantasy. Colour Wielders, book one of the Heirs of the Magykal Realm series, is her first novel. When she's not spending time in her fantasy world, Dawna loves football, reading, and pretending she's a top chef in the kitchen. Oh, and worshiping her dogs and husband.

Authors Links




My Review

I really enjoyed this Urban Fantasy book! It has a great mix of the Magickals world crossing into our world, and the changes that can happen. I will admit I had my confused areas, but that does happen with me and fantasy books.

We have a mix of the Fae and Mythology and even some from the Aruthian Legends, so it was interesting for sure. We have some witty comments that relate to many things today that I liked and found funny at times. Overall the book is very interesting.

It does start off with a shocker; I mean the first few paragraphs is Quinn losing her virginity, and being betrayed. I am not really spoiling anything, as it happens right away. Then everything spirals out of control.

I found I didn’t really like Quinn a lot in the beginning. She did grow on me as the story went on. At first it just seemed she got over the trauma of her first time in the first chapter, and was ready to lust and move on to another guy, then from him to Arik, (first the traumatic one, then Devlin, then Arik) Though we don’t get sex again right away but she sure is ready to go there. Just that part bugged me a bit, there is no way a girl will get over something like that within days and lust after 2 other virtual strangers (I understand we have a magical connections on those, but still just didn’t go over well for me on that part)

But overall this is a great book, the relationship Quinn has with her brother Ian is special, and I really liked that. I found the relationship that develops with Quinn and Arik sweet and it sat well with me, if a bit fast I still liked the idea of them together.

Wow, that cliffhanger and shocker at the end was something. Now I am anxious for book two, but see nowhere when it will be out, so it’s a bummer it may be a big wait. I sure hope not! I need to see what happens, I will say it again, I absolutely Hate cliffhangers that leave us hanging in the middle of some major development or scenes. Just hate it.

Anyway, even though there is that hated cliffhanger, I still highly recommend this book. If you like fantasy books, or paranormal romances, then you will like this for sure.

5 out of 5 stars for me.

I received a copy of this book from the author for my honest review.



Excerpt ~ Part of Chapter One

Chapter One
Virgin Territory
Gentle fingertips grazed the edge of her jaw, trailing down her neck to her collarbone. His citrine gaze stared deeply into her eyes, and her body heated at his tender touch.
"You're okay, yeah?" Thaene asked, his voice hoarse from their lovemaking.
Am I okay? She hardly knew. Though she had nothing to compare it to, this feeling was more than giving her virginity to him. Quinn felt like something bigger inside stirred to life, wanting to escape.
"You know I love you. I'm sorry if it hurt." He kissed her again, his lips caressing hers as if he could take the ache away. "Say something, Quinn. Please."
"I love you, Thaene." She pressed herself into him, passionately returning his affection. As their kiss continued, Quinn wondered if he wanted more. She also wondered if she had more to give.
"I want us together always. Do you want that, Quinn?" Thaene's eyes danced with a mixture of emotions—love, passion, possessiveness, and something else she couldn't name.
"We can have forever. You want that, don't you?" Thaene asked.
"Yes," Quinn answered breathlessly before realizing what she'd agreed to. She smiled, finding his need for her exciting. "Forever is a long time. But I could do it with you."
Thaene smiled back. Happiness lit his face. He looked like he'd just won a major prize—he looked triumphant.
"Being with you on your birthday was very special to me. You've given me such a precious gift."
"I love you. I can't imagine my first time with anyone else."
Besides, my gift of Sight showed you to me, over and over. How could I not give myself to you?

Her gift had shown her something else as well. Since she didn't understand it, Quinn ignored it. She'd followed her heart where Thaene was concerned. Not even her mother's dislike—or in spite of it— changed her mind. Following your heart always led you down the right path.
Thaene lightly brushed her hair from her face, then he rested his forehead on hers.

"There's something else I'd like you to give me. Will you do that? Give me what I desire the most?" 
The longing in his voice made Quinn squirm underneath him. Right now, she'd give him anything.
"It's the most precious gift of all. One I'll cherish forever."
Oh my God. He wants to marry me.
"Yes," Quinn said, drawing in a breath. "I'll give you anything."
"Good." Thaene nuzzled her neck. "I want you to show me your Magyk."
"What?" Quinn blinked at him, wondering if she'd heard him right.
"If you want us to have forever, you must show me your Magyk."
The dead seriousness of his voice, and the unflinching look in his eyes, told Quinn Thaene wasn't joking.
"Magic? I don't understand. I have no magic." She had the Sight, of course, but she'd never told him about that. Ever.
"This isn't a joke, Princess. Forever can be ours if you show it to me."
"Thaene. Please. Stop this."
Dread crawled up her spine, and she shivered. Something terrible had just happened between them—a shift of horrific proportions. Suddenly, in his house, and in his bed, she felt like a cruel trick had been perpetrated on her.
Rays of moonlight flooded in through the window, highlighting his now vicious, black eyes. Quinn gasped and tried to move away from him, but he'd trapped her underneath him. The candles flickered, then flared in the bedroom as Thaene's seductively sweet voice—the same one that had professed his love for her—turn cold-blooded and sadistic.

"Taking your virginity on your birthday was the only way. We're running out of time. Show. It. To. Me!"
"Show you what?" Quinn croaked.

Quaking from fear, she blinked back her tears. Caught in a tangle of his red satin sheets, with the weight of her first lover bearing down on her, she felt a thousand times the fool for believing in this cold, calculating man. She felt even more stupid for ignoring what the Sight had shown her.
How can a tourmaline-blue gem morphing into a sapphire possibly foreshadow what Thaene’s doing?
Her perfect evening had devolved into a night of stark terror.

"From tonight, Quinn Sinclair, every time you close your eyes, every time a breeze caresses your skin, you will think about me, about us. You will crave my touch." Thaene's voice came out slowly and matter-of fact. Through hooded eyes, he stared down at her. Painfully, he squeezed her temples with his thumbs. "I will always be in here, inside your mind. You belong to me."
"Thaene. You're hurting me. Why are you doing this?"

Emotionally and mentally flayed, her old reality lay in shredded scraps around her as Quinn stared at the monster looming over her. Hot, stinging tears poured from her eyes at the loss of her Thaene, her fun-loving boy with Zac Efron good looks.

"Why?" she whimpered again. "I waited for you. I loved you."
"Where is it, Princess?" Thaene snarled, ignoring her questions and protestations. Cruel fingers grabbed her face, digging into the hollows of both cheeks. Sharp fingernails scored her skin, drawing blood.
"You're so lovely, Quinn. Every night I dreamed about being with you. Do you think I like hurting you? Do you think I want to cause you pain? Give me what I want. Don't make me be this way with you."
A curtain of brown hair fell over Thaene's face, hiding it. Quinn sighed, happy for any reprieve. She couldn’t take seeing his evilness reflected in his eyes.

"Please, Thaene. I don't understand," Quinn cried, struggling against his grip as his muscular body pressed her deeper into his mattress.
Stupid self-defense. It's useless.
All those hours her brother Iain spent drilling her on moves designed to keep her safe meant nothing in the face of Thaene's imposing energy.

"Show me now, you stupid bitch!" he commanded, his eyes large with rage. "You have no idea what's at stake. My survival and the future of my world depend on this."
"S-show y-you? What world?" Quinn stuttered.

The oppressive stench of burnt sugar and blood wafted off Thaene. It filled her nostrils, making her choke back the bile rising in her throat. In all the months they'd dated, he'd never smelled repulsive.
Though Thaene’s surfer-boy build appeared thin and tall, somehow he weighed a ton. The more he pressed into her, the more her legs numbed. Even if she freed herself, Quinn would fall flat on her face as soon as she stood.

Strong hands moved to her neck and squeezed, making breathing and speech nearly impossible. Finding what little voice remained, she choked out, "Thaene, I… I thought you cared about me. We made love."
They hadn't made love at all. Just the opposite.
"No, Princess. We fucked." Thaene voiced her thought as though he’d read her mind. "You should learn the difference." Then his intonation softened. "Of course I love you. I love everything that is mine."

He kissed her roughly, biting her lip. "Play nice, Princess. Show me your Magyk and this can all be over. We'll go to Moincata, free him, then be on our way. Forever, Princess. We will have eternity together."

Thane's words floored Quinn. More tears, this time sparked by her surprise, poured from her eyes. He'd lost his mind if he thought for one minute she'd stay with him. And why did he keep calling her princess? Magic? Besides her now borked gift, she didn't have any supernatural abilities. Thaene had seen every inch of her. How could she hide something from him? As terrifying and ironically laughable as this all was, nothing funny could come from a man who believed in magic and was willing to do her bodily harm in its pursuit.
Thaene began chanting in what Quinn recognized as Gaelic. All her life, her mother often spoke the ancient language, and Quinn understood a good amount. Tonight, for whatever reason, not one word registered in her brain as the melodic words poured from his mouth in fast succession. They flowed in and around Quinn. Never had she experienced such a strange sensation—a pulling and coaxing of something inside her.

The phrase the power of words now had a literal meaning to Quinn.
As Thaene continued, the sensation intensified, growing stronger. A buzzing of unknown energy pulsed within every cell, making her muscles twitch.

Just when Quinn thought she couldn't stand anything more, an explosive crash in the other room brought their attention to the doorway. Loud footsteps stomped down the hall, moving closer at a rapid rate.

haene abandoned his chant, and his body tensed for action. For an instant, her surroundings shimmered. Things that had appeared one way, briefly changed into something else.
Quinn squinted to stop the tricks her eyes played, as the truth of the room came into focus. The romantic and inviting room turned into a space littered with trash. The exquisite, down mattress turned soiled and threadbare.
"Fuck!" Thaene cursed, glaring at the doorway.
Whomever or whatever approached had immense power; it announced itself with waves of energy before the person came into view. A moment later, a tall, broad-shouldered man with dark auburn hair and purple-tanzanite eyes filled the threshold.
The mysterious newcomer held a large sword in his right hand—at least five feet long—which glowed with the brightest colors she'd ever seen. The hues danced around the blade, making the sword seem alive with power. Its unearthly light cast a strange glow on his features, equally as malevolent as Thaene’s. Why he’d dressed in clothes fit for a member of the Society for Creative Anachronism, Quinn couldn’t fathom.

"Get off her!" the man said in a rich, baritone voice. "My daughter is not part of this."
"Daughter?" Quinn asked, her mouth agape. "You’re not my father. My father is dead. Paul's my father." As she stared at the man, something about him did seem familiar. But, father? No way; not possible.
"Big picture still muddy, isn't it? Yes, Quinn. This is your father, High King Finn Bheara of Flaitheas Draíochta, the Magykal Realm." Thaene turned to the man and growled. "And she is very much a part of this. She is mine."